
The agony at the beginning made sense but they went too far without her getting a divorce first made her a cheater just like her husband. The story should make it clearer and less repeated sections.
AllureTV TeamOficial· 2 weeks agoHi, Thank you for your thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to explain what didn't work for you in the story. I understand your point about the character's choices and the need for more clarity in the plot. I'll also pay closer attention to reducing repetitive sections and improving the overall flow of future stories. Your feedback is very valuable and helps me continue improving. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. ❤️


















