ly pham· 3 weeks ago
The storyline is good, but the hero is weak; he didn't even attempt to investigate anything, and the villains faced no consequences for their actions. How can they allow these villains to go unpunished while also naming one of their daughters after a woman associated with them? These details ruin the story and make it feel unrelatable.
AllureTV TeamOficial· 2 weeks agoThank you for sharing your thoughts. ❤️ I understand what you mean, and you make some very fair points. A stronger hero and clearer consequences for the villains would have made the ending more satisfying. I really appreciate feedback like this because it helps me write stronger and more believable stories in the future. Thank you!
