
Good story, but the editing can be better. He acted like he met her for the first time at the gala when they already met several times. Other places too. It would be nice to see their personal connection developed after the letter.
AllureTV TeamOficial· 1 week agoThank you for your thoughtful feedback! You make a valid point regarding the continuity of their interactions. I'll review that section to ensure their previous encounters are reflected more consistently. I also appreciate your suggestion about exploring their personal connection after the letter—it's an aspect that could certainly add more depth to their relationship. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts.












