
Two stars. Story is good but choppy, need better details. For example, why did he think that she is dead for four years? Too many loose ends make the story less compelling.
AllureTV TeamOficial· 1 week agoThank you for your feedback! I appreciate your observations. You're right that some aspects of the story could have been developed further, particularly the circumstances that led him to believe she had been dead for four years. I'll take your comments into account and work on providing more context and resolving loose ends to make the narrative more engaging and coherent. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts.












